tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1224871085252881908.post8233243625004889290..comments2024-01-20T17:26:40.772-08:00Comments on Artsy Butterfly: 'The Rockefeller Proposal' - A Writing ExerciseCathy Buetihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09176782992604138092noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1224871085252881908.post-91146480830788380682012-02-17T04:23:55.499-08:002012-02-17T04:23:55.499-08:00Well, I am a fan of the simple present, and this w...Well, I am a fan of the simple present, and this was perfect--I hope you write more.....Dianehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16471868216912351266noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1224871085252881908.post-5600155296005740312012-02-17T01:22:07.743-08:002012-02-17T01:22:07.743-08:00Cathy you truly touched me with this piece of writ...Cathy you truly touched me with this piece of writing, sending little shivers up me, so vivid! Yes very in the moment, beautifully expressed, thanks for sharing. xxKathttp://dreamcolour-kat.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1224871085252881908.post-62601442891328967662012-02-16T22:10:50.375-08:002012-02-16T22:10:50.375-08:00It's a very touching story, Cathy. I'm not...It's a very touching story, Cathy. I'm not a fan of the simple present, but it worked well here. I use it to report my dreams. It makes it easier for me to relive the dream and remember more details as I write. <br />Thank you for sharing!Jay Paolonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09647807643476130105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1224871085252881908.post-63434339738710240032012-02-16T09:55:53.234-08:002012-02-16T09:55:53.234-08:00How nice to be able to put so much emotion into wo...How nice to be able to put so much emotion into words. :-)PoetessWughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05269054577952128702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1224871085252881908.post-35877722994672457142012-02-16T09:29:37.007-08:002012-02-16T09:29:37.007-08:00Awww, Cathy! This is so romantic. Out of all place...Awww, Cathy! This is so romantic. Out of all places, The Rockefeller Center at Christmas time. Oh, I picture the scene in front of me. Yes, the present tense has a way of pulling in the reader, that's why my mentor told me. Lovely!Claudia Zurchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00302024950570710809noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1224871085252881908.post-88351972154339339152012-02-16T07:53:43.078-08:002012-02-16T07:53:43.078-08:00Cathy, this is very touching! Your description is ...Cathy, this is very touching! Your description is so vivid, I could almost feel the wind and the cold.jgrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02595976689687828149noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1224871085252881908.post-76957488346058132932012-02-16T07:41:30.514-08:002012-02-16T07:41:30.514-08:00That is just beautiful, Cathy! I was right there w...That is just beautiful, Cathy! I was right there with you two and felt the immensity of that moment!! One to cherish for sure!! Love, SilkeSilke Powershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17094855019089665976noreply@blogger.com